Day 10

"Love makes the worst people the greatest actors"

10th of December, 2016

Collette, Collette

Your tears I'll collect

I'll store them in a jar

To carefully protect

Collette, Collette

Your pain I'll collect

I'll blur every scar

Your soul I'll perfect

Collette, Collette

Your tears I'd collect

But you smoked me like a cigar

What did I expect?

"Collette"

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Bear]

I have 2 rewording suggestions (I'll store them in a jar And carefully protect) in a jar to carefully protect
(A new soul I'll confect) A new soul I'll perfect

I don't know if I would complain about being put between a woman's lips and burned up :~) Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Omikron]

Thank you for the feedback, I changed it and it reads a lot better now, thanks for the help!

Interesting thought, I guess only women can make a man wish to be lit up and burned to ashes if it would mean to come near her lips, now that is a passion that I would like to see more of. Creepy...

// O