Day 9

Tetractys! (Kind of)

9th of December, 2016

You

Be still

Just stand there

So I can see

Your velvet body

Your unretouched being

Hear your mellisonant breath

Just stay there like a figurine

Let me adore you until I die

You, my very own, precious Christmas gift

"You for Christmas"

Author's Note

Pic by lostknightkg at DeviantArt!

Reviews

[Bear]

Admiration in its purest form is really an obsession which is only one step away from being a stalker, so be careful and think twice before you decide to unwrap this gift (sorry I couldn't help myself this morning, I am feeling a jolly Christmas spirit) The poem is touching and has a sentimental feel for me as it brings to mind such gifts lost to time but brought back to life by your poem, thank you for that :~)
Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap! Clap!

[Omikron]

I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it, merry christmas Bear :)

// O

[Poet]

I like the obsession that's hidden under cute flattery. Nice.

[Omikron]

Nice, that's the feeling I was aiming for! Thanks for the review!

// O