Tiny Little People

Universe is a void beyond our comprehension, and we are almost nothing compared to it. It is only our minds that makes us forget the fact of how tiny we really are.

Around me there's tiny little people with tiny little brains,
And tiny little feet with tiny little shoes,
Wearing tiny little clothes, holding tiny little phones,
Taking tiny little breaths, saying tiny little words,
Living a tiny little bit longer for every tiny little day,
Having a tiny little bit hope that they aren't just tiny little people,
But the tiny little people don't know a tiny little thing,
They are nothing but tiny and little,
Yet they are bigger than anything I know.

Author's Note

Like and comment if you enjoyed these little thoughts of mine.

- Omikron

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

I read once that repitition of more than 3 instances of a word in a poem is frowned upon in poetic circles - I reckon you have killed quite a few of the stuffed shirts with this one - 'death by frowning' lol

I came, I liked, I commented.

[Omikron]

Rule number one of poetry: Screw the rules

[LapseOfMind]

Here is a tiny, little review: I enjoyed reading this!

[Omikron]

Haha! That made me laugh a tiny, little bit... Thanks for reviewing!