I Will love You till the day I die.

This is a poem-based story I made a couple of years ago where a man writes for the love of his life who died... Please Enjoy :)

People say that love is great. It happens when you find a lovable mate.

 But none of these facts seemed to be true, until the day I had met you.

 You came to me as a ray of light, a shiny source of strength and might.

 

We fell in love at the first sight, and kept talking day and night. 

Time went fast and you became mine, everything was going totally fine. 

We got married and had kids, took so many pictures, made so many home vids. 

I still remember the day we went outside and stared at the moon, i still remember that you used to wait for me to come home from the office at noon. 

But then a dreadful incident had taken place, when i heard there wasn't much time for you to keep up with life's pace. 

We tried everything we could, but time was destined to go as it would. 

And then there came a time when you untimely died, and i was left with nobody to tie my tie. 

I have loved you after marriage and obviously before, I will keep loving you till the day I am no more.

Author's Note

Please ignore my Grammar problems :( . Im just a beginner here.. But please critique my writing if you want. Because it will just make me work hard to be better.

Reviews

[Tony Jordan]

This is lovely indeed.
I would personally group the lines into couplets - two line groups with a space line in between. e.g.

People say that love is great.
It happens when you find a lovable mate.

But none of these facts seemed to be true,
until the day I had met you.

You came to me as a ray of light,
a shiny source of strength and might.
etc., etc

And I'd change the font to a less 'shouty' choice - this seems like shouting on the screen.

If you are new here (and I say if because so many pretend to be new but aren't) then I'd take people's over-exhuberant praise with a pinch of salt.

Welcome to the WC. Well done.

[Omi]

Thanks a lot bro... And i really am new... Wish me best of luck ^_^ ... I need it

[Manasa.L]

Beginner! dude you are more for a beginner.
You have a potential of being a great writer.
Just keep writing, nothing can stop you.
Coming to your poem its fabulous.Loved it:)

[Omi]

Thanks a lot :)..