Take in

Take in

A Poem by Jean Carlos
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A poem about love.

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 I always try to find something that I cannot see.
 It feels concrete but its existance is only felt by me.
 
 A sudden small movie turns into a complete reality.
 Slowly chewing away my very own sanity.
 
 Trying to find out how it may be shaped, but it changes constantly with no constant face.
 I leave my feelings up to fate trying to convey how love may also turn you into prey.

© 2016 Jean Carlos


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Jean Carlos
Complete honesty is all I need.

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Love is the ultimate brain drug
We wonder and think
of everything and nothing
going around in a million circles
enjoying the torment
i totally relate to your words

Posted 8 Years Ago


Things can be felt that way. You may feel it is so real but it may not be so. Then you feel you are helpless before fate.
I like your use of rhymes

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jean Carlos

8 Years Ago

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Jean Carlos
Jean Carlos

No man's land, Puerto Rico, Puerto Rico



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