The right choice

The right choice

A Poem by Jean Carlos
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Sometimes people talk before actually thinking about the consecuences this is a small lecture on the matter.

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Never show the real you or it will become a weakness.

If you don’t want to be eaten up, it is better to think clearly.

A single word may give too much, so be wary even if it’s just a hunch.

Believing something that is fake will lead you to stray.

Weakening your soul to the very core.

Learn to tell those that can be trusted because one single arrow may also miss its target.

© 2016 Jean Carlos


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Jean Carlos
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Sadness and anger combined!

A little wording note: consider "Eaten up" instead of "Eaten out". There is some old slang there, not sure if you are aware....

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Jean Carlos

8 Years Ago

Thank you for the tips!

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Added on April 3, 2016
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Tags: trust, wisdom, compassion

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Jean Carlos
Jean Carlos

No man's land, Puerto Rico, Puerto Rico



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