THE GHOST

A tale of ghost

Samantha Faith walked into the school bathroom and opened a bathroom stall where she planned to stay until school was out.
She shut the stall and slowly drifted to sleep.
When Samantha woke up.The bathroom was pitch black and she couldn't see a thing.
Her heart beat in her chest and she remembered a story about people who were in the bathroom after dark.
A story about a girl who ditched class and hid in the Janitors closet and a ghost ate her alive.
No! Ghosts aren't real !
Samantha thought to herself. She started running as fast as she could.
She couldn't move. Something was holding her. She could feel it's bony hand grasping her shoulder.
The next day,Angel, Samantha's best friend found Samantha's body cut into tiny pieces in the toilet.
The End.

Reviews

[matrixmark]

For a piece which has few words, i found nyself thinking that this could be some sort of opening prologue in which samathas best friend could be finind herself being hunted down or taunted in her dreams by the said ghost. The piece really did have my mind going into overdrive as to where it can go next. Whether it be paranormal activitie or even a have the story open up into about the legend behind the ghost.

Short but an interesting concept was hidden in the background.

Mark.