I opened my eyes and saw i was in a garden,a very beautiful garden.I looked around me,when i heard someone calling me,turning around,i did not see anyone "Hello who is there?" I shouted hearing my own echo,"I am here",a quite voice said.I decided to use my third eye,closing my eyes,i concentrated on opening my third eye,soon i felt it my third eye had opened,"Where are you!" I shouted again "I am behind you", the voice reply,turning i gasped.Standing before me was a very beautiful woman,looking at her i saw a star on her forehead,she had a pale face and a very long beautiful hair.
Remembring why i am here "Who are you?Am i dead?Why am i here?" I rushed at my questions,she just smiled;even her smile is beautiful."I am Anthen," "Anthen,Anth.....en,you mean the moon goddess?" I asked,when she nodded her head,i bow in respect to her, "Did you remember what happened to you before you are here?" Anthen asked me,i started thinking suddenly it clicked "Yes! I was running away from the Millennium triple witches before i was hit by a vehicle coming towards me,wait why all this questions,am i dead?" I asked "No,you are not dead",Anthen reply "If i am not dead,then why am i here",I ask her "I brought you here for a reason" Anthen said "A reason?What reason?", I ask "Yes,the reason is,the world that you are living is evil,those with powers kill those without powers,if you don't act fast,we may lose the battle to the evil ones", Anthen answered "Evil? What evil?" I ask "The Millennium witches had gone to acquire more powers from the underworld to fight the good people and defeat them.You have to use the legendary blue knife to call upon the powerful full bue moon" Anthen answer "But i thought that the blue knife was razed in the fire", I told her "It wasn't when the priest found out that he was trapped in the fire with his family,so he used his last strength and power and send the knife to the human world,to be in a safe hand with a family he knew sometime ago" Anthen said.
"A blue knife?" I asked her with shocked "Yes a blue knife and with it you can kill the Millennium triple witches" she said "So how can a blue knife kill some legend witches?" I still ask her "Well it was said that the blue knife,has the power to call forth the powerful blue moon",she answered "A blue moon? But they don't exist",i told her "It actually exist,only it's rare,the blue moon has the powe to kill anything be it motal or immotal.The blue moon once upon a time killed a very powerful priestess,who was more evil than the Millennium triple witches.She was a priestess far way back to the first people who became witch,so with her powers she treated people like slaves and killed anyone who dare to disobey her.Everyone was living in fear until a day where a girl called 'Valley' killed her with this very blue moon and gave the people the knife to use in time of danger and disapear and people gave the knife to a high priest to keep.Then the Milennium triple witches came and heard of it and fought to take the knife from the priest.One day the people woke up and saw the priest house razed to ashes.So it's a mistery if the blue knife still exist or as razed down with the priest,but the worst fear is if it is with the Millennium triple witches" She says "So with this blue knife you can use it to summon the blue moon and kill the Millennium triple witches" i asked which she nodded "And now the priest is either dead or alive and the blue knife is nowhere to be found till this day" i said and she nodded her head once agin "Well this is intersting" I said,but deep within me i know this blue knife is out there but not with the Millennium triple witches.
A horn jolted me back to reality and i saw a car heading my way but before i could move away,i was hit and flew and hit my head on something.I was struggling to open my eyes when i head a voice telling me to 'hold on'.I tried to do as it say but i was losing it to unconsiousness.My last thought was ' I did try to be alive mom,but i fail you,am sorry am coming to meet you sooner,am sorry i didn't survive this' before i was taken into the hands of darkness.
i kept on running and never dare to look back,with that i push my legs faster,ignoring the blood pouring out of my body.Then i saw a tiny road and followed it not caring where it will lead me
Let me introduce myself and tell you a bit about my family and the reason why i am running away
My name is Ifeyinwa star moon,am the last daughter of my family.We are not like others people,we have some magical powers,you see we don't stay or live with the humans,we live in a forest.My mom can see into the future and tells you what is going to happened,So they called her the 'Seer,one who sees'.It was through my mom i got my powers,my two elder brother don't have any,but they can fight.
Years later my dad died after a brief illness,My mom was sad about loosing my father that she stops performing her ritual which made her to be ageless,when she stops she starting ageing.
We are known as the white witch.There are two types of witches one is know as thw white witch moon and the other one as the Millennium triple witches.They are a living legend and according to my mum they are ancient,who are very strong,so strong that nothing can kill them.The white witch moon and them are know as rival,They have been trying to let the world knew of their exist and fear them,we have been perventing it that was how they started killing our kind am the only surviour of the white witch moon.How am i going to kill them,am not that strong enough to defeat not only one but threee.
I ran for my life,i must not let my family down,they die so that i can escape,a memory came and i was lost in the land of memories.I remember when i asked my mom how to kill the millenniuum triple witches,"Well mom there had to be a way for them to die,they are immotal,but all immotal die,because if we can die,they also can die,right mom?" i asked her "Yes,they can die like us?" My mom reply "So if they can die like us,then why are they called aliving legend" i ask again "Yes they are ancient,because they killed 'The one who sees and dies',he was the only one,who has the power to be alive forever more until they tricked him and killed him,taking his powers and immotality with them,that's why they can't be killed," She explian "But isn't there a way to kill them so that peace will reign" i ask my mom again "There is only one way.Well i don't know if it's true,or just a rumor but it's was just a legend pass down to our generations and it's only a secret" she said.I nodded my head "The only way you can kill the Millennium triple witches is with a knife" She said "A knife? I thought it was something else,not an ordinary knife,We have a dozens of them we can use" I told her,but she smiled "Am not just talking about an ordinary knife,am talking about the Lengendary blue knife" She explianed.
Posted 7 Years Ago
7 Years Ago
I have to read this start to finish as and when i can, promise you.
There's true mag.. read moreI have to read this start to finish as and when i can, promise you.
There's true magic in the story you're writing, so many ends to eventually tie up and make obvious to the reader. And I hope you do, as time goes on. For now I know English isn't your first language, consequently there are small mishaps of grammar but they can be easily tidied. Your sentences are somewhat long, crammed but in some ways, it makes one want to start and rush to see what's going to happen... so the speed is a two way journey.
I'd love to know how you choice this type of writing. Did you plan your chapter or are you letting the words write themselves, I wonder?
Whatever, dear friend.. I can see more than more potential and so look forward to reading your next chapter. Meantime, sending you blessings and smiles for the Christmas season and way into next year. :) .
7 Years Ago
Oooops, sorry, for 'choice', please read 'chose' :)
7 Years Ago
Tanx,i know my english is that good,but i will see what i can do about it. It was among my first sto.. read moreTanx,i know my english is that good,but i will see what i can do about it. It was among my first story i have written then i was learning
You have amazing story-telling ability, believe me. And remember, I can't speak a single word of Y.. read moreYou have amazing story-telling ability, believe me. And remember, I can't speak a single word of YOUR language! l
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Hahahahahahahha:D okay will try to translate it. Thank you
7 Years Ago
It's fine... i can only speak English and a few words of this or that. Thje writing is yours and ha.. read moreIt's fine... i can only speak English and a few words of this or that. Thje writing is yours and has a wonderful flow. Will read more as and when I can.