Sakura

Lonely Sakura,

High upon the mountain side,

Beauty all alone.

Author's Note

I need a name -_- What do you think?

Reviews

[lee von cleef]

She Dwelt Among the Untrodden Ways


She dwelt among the untrodden ways
Beside the spring of Dove;
A maid whom there were none to praise,
And very few to love.

A violet by a mossy stone
Half-hidden from the eye !
- Fair as a star , when only one
Is shining in the sky .

She lived unknown , and few could know
When Lucy ceased to be;
But she is in her grave , and , oh ,
The difference to me !

William Wordsworth

Just thought this fit you and your poem.

[外人 (Gaiji..]

What a wonderful haiku ! Loved it !!

[Spookers]

this is cute ^_^

[Sasha]

Cute.

[Victoria PoetryBunny]

I like the beauty in this with the nature, really nice short write that has beautiful imagery and is simple.

[Legolas]

Beautiful piece. I loved the imagery. I am a great fan of Haiku.

[eatmills]

Nice Haiku, wish I had this as an entry when I had my Haiku contest.

Oh you can thank Maria for making me read this.

[Pax]

poignant piece!
great!

[Allie]

Creates a sad and slightly moving image.

[Laura Maidah]

nice try

[Aly Jones]

What do you mean by "nice try"? This piece is amazing!

[Laura Maidah]

opinion yo

[Hester Vane]

I like the name, its simple and very appropriate for the piece.