Infertile Journey

The unexpected is now expected,
On a blind road not knowing where it leads,
With a bag of joy to share,
Lost travellers telling me sorrow is near,
Decreasing my hope in bliss,
Regardless i still persist,
Wish i never have to say it was stupid,
The journey that was initiated by cupid,
I still keep pushing
With the act to disappoint spectators,
My pace slowly reduces,
About to reach the peak but my legs are weak,
I was so adamant that i became less observant,
I've been bleeding from my back,
Right from the very start,
Multiple stab wounds to my spine,
I then realise the journey is an illusion,
There's never a companion's submission
So i retreat and crawl back into my shell,
Forgetting about the journey that is barren,
To join the lost travellers who are returning,
To the point we don't notice the infertile journey anymore.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Easy to find bad road and place.
"To join the lost travellers who are returning,
To the point we don't notice the infertile journey anymore."
Powerful words and journey shared in the amazing poetry my friend.
Coyote

[Olumegbon]

Thanks alot Coyote, i really appreciate your review.

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome my friend.

[Jamestown]

A deep piece of work, that has ups and downs!
I enjoyed reading, I can tell that this was a journey within the mind
of the poet:) Well written and delivered, thanks for sharing
and b-blessed!

[Olumegbon]

A journey the poet experienced
..thanks for the review

[Dara]

Your poem is very deep and thought provoking. It is one worth reading many times to soak up all of its meaning because there are so many intricate parts to it. Excellent write!

[Olumegbon]

I'm glad you enjoyed it, thanks very much

[wordman]

a sad write,all full of joy with a bag of fun and
all a sudden you were dragged down

[Olumegbon]

Exactly, thanks for the review