Rays

A Poem by OliviaTheElf

ANOTHER poem from English class. I had 3 random words and 2 minuets to write a poem with them. Here's what I came up with.

The shine through the windows,

Stained with Gods light,

The Sistine Chapel stands,

With all of its might...

The flashing of his heart,

Micheals tiresome expidition,

As he painted for the world,

A beautiful addition...

© 2011 OliviaTheElf

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Author's Note

I Love, love, LOVE the design and art of the Sistine Chapel. My 3 words were: Sistine chapel, shine, and flashing.

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Daniel DeLorez

Another great poem. :) Short and sweet... That's my style. :) The only error I saw was "Gods" instead of "God's."

Posted 13 Years Ago

dhg kfvkh

Short intense poems are the best,
like yours, giving daily grind all the rest.

You summon what I want to find,
you foster my mind.

And not at least, you cry to me:
Just be, just be!

Posted 13 Years Ago

SoulCrusader (Yas)

So beautifully written this is, very angelic and oozes positive imagery, excellent :)

Posted 13 Years Ago

rwar ish me

very nice read, I really enjoyed it
Its short but very explainitory
Great piece!
~Amai

Posted 13 Years Ago

Nishant Gupta

nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on September 2, 2011
Last Updated on September 6, 2011

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OliviaTheElf

Ajara, Queensland, Australia

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