Rays

ANOTHER poem from English class. I had 3 random words and 2 minuets to write a poem with them. Here's what I came up with.

The shine through the windows,

Stained with Gods light,

The Sistine Chapel stands,

With all of its might...

 

The flashing of his heart,

Micheals tiresome expidition,

As he painted for the world,

A beautiful addition...

Author's Note

I Love, love, LOVE the design and art of the Sistine Chapel. My 3 words were: Sistine chapel, shine, and flashing.

Reviews

[Daniel DeLorez]

Another great poem. :) Short and sweet... That's my style. :) The only error I saw was "Gods" instead of "God's."

[dhg kfvkh]

Short intense poems are the best,
like yours, giving daily grind all the rest.

You summon what I want to find,
you foster my mind.

And not at least, you cry to me:
Just be, just be!

[SoulCrusader (Yas)]

So beautifully written this is, very angelic and oozes positive imagery, excellent :)

[rwar ish me]

very nice read, I really enjoyed it
Its short but very explainitory
Great piece!
~Amai

[Nishant Gupta]

nice one do read mine too "QUEST OF LIFE".