Angels Move

Angels Move

A Poem by OliviaTheElf
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Well, this started out as an assignment for class. We had to pick a paragraph in a random story, choose 15-20 words and make a poem out of those words we chose.

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Hell in almost every bone,

Shadows of Angels howled,

I crawled,

Stealing enough Holy messages,

Faraway, I was looking for something to stop me...

 

 

 

© 2011 OliviaTheElf


Author's Note

OliviaTheElf
This poem is about a child crawling through the underground while demons are chasing him. It's symbolic of my trials and tribulations on my path to finding God.

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This poem is amazing keep up the great work I hope to read more from you

Posted 13 Years Ago
The metaphor is obvious, and I liked it.
Revelations!

Posted 13 Years Ago
Awesome!! I like this, when there is triumph and hurdels in our way we must proceed, I like this I can feel a revelation going on.....xo

Posted 13 Years Ago

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 Added on August 23, 2011
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