Question

Anger shines on a question. (Stud M. Note Book) :)

Hallowed eyes starring down

I look up and feel the grey pulsing through my veins 

held prisoner in a gaze

as dead as the leaves stacked in the center of the universe

it folds me, but I don't let it show

I must remain strong

Tapping your fingers like beats of time

everything draining down

but I can't look away

so we sit in the silence

waiting to be broken

I never meant to break

yet I fall into a deep well

and drown on my own tears

nothing matters anymore

and I no longer care

but I'm dying

with no way of trying to survive

leaving us with the condemned question:
is it better to die alone,

or be held an eternal prisoner?...

Reviews

[Rob Santana]

Man,haha you are a very good writer,and you will get even better!!!

[zainul]

Wonderful poem
Great question.

[afra]

wow ....beautiful and deep ...good job

[Katy Stash]

You're very talented

[Katy Stash]

You're very talented

[Celestial Witch Child]

I really love this. Perhaps expand on the last stanza since it's noticeably the shortest of them all.