Shaking

No description really (Stud M. Note Book) :)

I feel the fog in my mind

it's passing down into my body

my eyesight blurring images

making it harder to walk in a straight line

I feel there's a numbness in my bones

and I could be sick with too much air

but I can't catch my breath

I can feel my heart wishing to grow cold

my thoughts are running together

I can't comprehend anything

everything is tangled with hints of hysteria

nothing is working the right way in my body

I ask to go to the bathroom

I look at those eyes

crazy, wild, painful, sickening eyes of a maniac

who's where they?

I feel the floor give in

on my back, I'm looking at the ceiling 

I can't force my weight up

I lay a twitching, shaking pile of rot on the floor

Then gravity kicks in, and I am standing again
and I remember I'm looking at the mirror

I'm trying to avoid eye contact

the girl in the mirror is painful to watch

I must wake up

I have to wake up

Reviews

[afra]

good job .....keep writing

[highthought]

through the journey of life we pass by various kind of problems,also we pass by people who send their hate in different ways.....but as u said lets wake up and i ll say lets do what does it take to make life saver

[HopelessRomantic]

Wow this is very moving great job!