My Wish

Poem

To forget

today, tomorrow, yesterday, and years before 

Forget this place in search of a new time, a new life, a new purpose

To run away 

Far away to see amazing worlds, simple homes,

and adore this world we live in

To dream

Endlessly, with future hope, and promised love

To respect nature and it's gifts

To write

As I used to.

Without weight or burden

With passion

To sing

As I used to. Filled with emotion and exploding with song

whether good or bad

To kiss

Passionately, endlessly, without restriction

To get away from here

To be loved by you

and to love you the same

Reviews

[Patch Silver]

To forget, run away, write, sing, kiss! It's great!
I feel bad giving critiques when I myself am not that great at writing. But I feel that the ending needs a little more Umph. Then again i might not know what I am talking about!
Loved it.

[Olivia Marie]

Thank you, and I'll try to think of a better ending.

[Olivia Marie]

:)

[Tabitha t]

dont we all wish to erase and start from scratch. ITS IMPOSSIBLE so we only wish about it. great writing

[Olivia Marie]

Thank you :)