First Love

Writing like Shakespeare?:)

When once the moon and stars they did abide 

And beneath wooden statues did I hide

And doted I upon a lovely lad

For smitten firstly I became quite mad

His iridescent eyes gazing like the stars above

Shimmering like the sea and gentle as a dove

Cooped up in majestic limbs 

I was then sure of his thoughts for me and I of him

Muttered I love you's and whispered poems

A new pathway of feelings down which we roamed

First love. 

Reviews

[Brittany DeFranco]

I love this, it certainly does explain how some people feel for their first love ^_^

[Attie Cole]

I love this! The way it's written is amazing, the descriptions and the way it flows. The words just easily float from your mouth. I wanna read it out loud in a British accent. xD
It's really really good.

[Isobella Rose]

Very good poem! Very good descriptions and it flowed nicely. Keep up the good work :)

[LOfCharlemagne]

I loved it! Well done. Very nice descriptions and use of adjectives. It is a well written and very romantic piece. Congratulations!

[Jai Garg]

Lol you did begin like Shakespeare and then got lost in the first love!