I Do wonder

Falling and love and not having the feelings returned

         I Do Wonder
 

I do wonder...... About all these feelings that I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... If these feelings will ever end Or if these thoughts of you will ever die I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile more To be able to hear your laughter-- all the time I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Author's Note

Please review and let me know what you think. This was very heartbreaking though.....

Reviews

[KAREN]

It is very well written and so heartbreaking when someone does not share the same feelings as you have!!

[just is]

Wow this is really amazing I enjoyed this write alot. Like the feelings.

[Goodbye]

Well your goal of honing your self-expression is certainly met with this piece, Steve.

This is a very good write, a glimpse into your feelings and angst.

[Jess.]

I like this, the flow and the ..... really ties it together. I've wondered these same things too, everyone has.
Nice poem :)

if you haven't told them how you feel, then really think about telling them now.
Rejection sucks, but so does the unknown, what could have been.

[Cody Wiggins]

Wow this brings me back to so many thing that ruined and helped my life. This is a really good write. You did a superb job. I hate to point it out but you misspelled a word.

[Stella]

I can feel the say some days.

Great work :)

[JustAlex]

awww....thats a sad and emotional poem hun, Trust me I know what the feeling is like all too well, but in all I love it, it was a very sad but beautifuly written piece. And I hope who ever you were in love with realize what they lost.
Keep writing :)

[Bethany]

I can really tell how heartfelt this is, and I think you have portrayed your feelings very well. I love how in your profile you wrote that you want to get all the stuff out of your head and put it online, this is so great and is probably the reason why most of us are here so welcome! I hope to see more of your writing online dude:)