I Do wonder

Falling and love and not having the feelings returned

         I Do Wonder
 

I do wonder...... About all these feelings that I have for you I wish you'd tell me what to do I do wonder...... If these feelings will ever end Or if these thoughts of you will ever die I do wonder...... What it would be like to enjoy your smile more To be able to hear your laughter-- all the time I do wonder...... About how I want to stay true But I don't know what else to do I do wonder...... Why I can't stop thinking of you Even though I really should want to I do wonder....... About me telling you what's in my heart And how your reaction could tear me apart

Author's Note

Please review and let me know what you think. This was very heartbreaking though.....

Reviews

[Christie Moses]

Oh I so know these feelings and can relate completely :(
Hugs

[Revenge<3'sMe]

The last two lines I'm in the situation right now. This was beautiful to read and I loved every second of it. Keep on writing you're wonderful at it.

[Gheeneil]

I like the simplicity. Indeed, people do wonder, even on simple things. Keep writing.

[Amy Vaughn]

So relatable. I like the last two lines the best. It's sad and heartbreaking like you said.

[Doreen]

Boy do I know what you mean in this one. It's an emotional roller coaster.
(In the 5th line down, you forgot the r in ever)
I do wonder, too.

[Loner]

Very well written .... it sure is a heartbreaking poem and makes all the one sided lovers think ....... I DO WONDER.

[arlery]

well written, especially the ending.

[poetic soul]

heartbreaking.....for sure...
but put up in a lovely and beautiful way..
i liked the end esply...
the most obvious fear in every love situation..
simply fab!!!

i like yo style..

[Stacey]

This is an outstanding write! There's a lot of emotion in your words, which tells me this was written from your heart. The most beautiful verses start in the heart before penned to paper, at least that's my thinking. The flow is lovely. I really like the concept of "I do wonder". When you wonder...you're feeling and that's amazing!

[Allison]

I really liked this. You say it was heartbreaking, and I can feel that from just reading it. There's a lot of emotion directed towards the audience, and it really affects us all, telling us either that there is someone out there, you, that may feel the way one does, or that we should be grateful for who we do have, for who does love us back, the way we love them.
Very good write, I enjoyed it.

-Pokie