The inevitable
A Poem by
Steve
A man approaches his friend with the news that he loves her.
Words! So many words! I was finally able to sayNearly able to keep my emotions at bay 'What a relief!' I thought as my words flowed and flowed I had gone to her private room Her humble abode I feared her response Her reaction to my heart But she stayed true to form Her sweetness overflowing Breathing and composure A constant battle However, I charged ahead Pedal to the medal I needed her to know Of my thoughts and feelings Waiting any longer would have been oh so unappealing You told me of your situation Very confusing I confessed to you my own Not any less heartaching Where do we go from here I asked so tenderly You told me of our (limited) options Not wanting to hurt me I left you right after My feelings now expressed With all my romantic words You probably felt pressed Sleep was difficult to get Later on that night I so hoped you wanted me too, or that you just might Our next steps are so unclear, not at all obvious Although my emotions are spent Our future is still ambiguous Our spending the next day together, was strange yet wonderful You went back to being yourself How so very loveable
© 2010 Steve
Author's Note
He had practiced this speech to his lady love for months.....and he then was finally able to tell her what he knew so well in his heart.
Reviews
Pretty and romantic..
Posted 13 Years Ago
oeh I like this! nice!
Posted 13 Years Ago
oeh I like this! nice!
I like this Steve-O. It seems very 'you'. Sometimes you just got to leap, despite not knowing where you'll land.
Posted 13 Years Ago
I like this Steve-O. It seems very 'you'. Sometimes you just got to leap, despite not knowing where you'll land.
Sometimes life tries to block loves path and yet sometimes when it's so intense and the feelings won't go away theres nothing more you can do then to surrender to the the blocks and move forward in love.. :) xx I enjoyed reading this and you penned your feelings well :) x
Posted 13 Years Ago
Sometimes life tries to block loves path and yet sometimes when it's so intense and the feelings won't go away theres nothing more you can do then to surrender to the the blocks and move forward in love.. :) xx I enjoyed reading this and you penned your feelings well :) x
Awww ! so sweet and romantic .
Posted 13 Years Ago
Awww ! so sweet and romantic .
Heartfelt and romantic. I loved reading this!
Posted 13 Years Ago
Heartfelt and romantic. I loved reading this!
romantic...
Posted 13 Years Ago
romantic...
Aw, very sweet, Steve...Is this autobiographical? ^-^
Posted 13 Years Ago
Aw, very sweet, Steve...Is this autobiographical? ^-^
Beautiful & romantic! Amazing~
Posted 13 Years Ago
Beautiful & romantic! Amazing~
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Added on November 5, 2010
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Steve NV
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I am a new writer here. I want get this stuff out of my head and put it online!! I find a great release to let go of intense, deep thoughts.
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