Skyler

Skyler

A Poem by Kalee

You did it
"Well there's no need to worry.
I hate you,
I don't want you to be part of my life anymore.
Just stay away from me."
From your lips to this page. 
How does it feel? 
I am out of your life. 
All we were, are, or could be
Is gone. 
If you want to apologize
I will listen
But I can't forgive you.
Who says that 
To their best friend?

© 2012 Kalee


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Instead of doing something stupid in reaction to him I'm just going to write. I know this is the type of poem you hear from a lot of teenage girls but I needed to vent.

Posted 12 Years Ago


Well, (comma) there's no need....

The hate you line is pretty banal. Show, don't tell.

It's repeated in the second to last line. Try nixing one or the other. Just a thought.

Posted 12 Years Ago



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