Hatred

random Haiku....first time writing one.....

Overwhelming hate

Physical torture of the mind

Feeling of not being loved

Author's Note

just a bit random....I'll crits on this so i know next time to know how to make them better than this one........ :D

Reviews

[James Watts]

I know that feeling

[Revolved]

Big-BOLD-Red letters with only three lines can say a lot to many people. Great-just excellent! I just love it! :D

[J.R Schlievert]

Wow, for just a few words, that says a lot. It brings up the question, what kind of torture as it? I'm going to lean towards some sort of mental torture. The only torture that can be collected by only a loved one.
A lot of pain… a lot of pain
Brilliant

[An owl on the moon]

It's amazing to take the Haiku form and create what seems so free. You've given us a powerful glimpse of hate and what it does to rip us apart inside. Excellent emotional piece.

[Crowley]

Writing is always the best way to get things out...this was very powerful and no mistaking the point. You should do this more often...I loved it. Good morning sunshine!

[Coyote Poetry]

Three powerful sentences. Bad place to be in these places the sentences can take you to. Better to run like hell and leave no tracks. A outstanding three line poem. Thank you.
Coyote