With Love To You

Sing with baited breath
Eyes smoldering in the candle light
Touch shows the words that cannot be spoken to the ear
Your sounds are all you need to say
As fingers dance over silken skin
Let this moment tattoo your soul
So that this beauty may stay forever

Author's Note

Comment as you please.

Reviews

[FJ Davis]

Have not been "tattooed" as often as I would have liked--nor, as recently. Still, I can recall that the lovely sentiments you so artfully describe had something to do with it. Have managed to cop a little beauty for myself--enough, I guess, to last the rest of the way.
Your poem is authentic--gorgeously so.

[Suzy Q]

Short, sweet, powerful. I like it.

[Sukriti Suki]

I loved ' Touch shows the words that cannot be spoken to the ear'....this is a wonderful piece....wonderful.

[Calypso]

Your words are like velvet.

[Laughing-Bear]

My Dear Writing Friend Chloe,
I feel this poem is one of the best I have read yet concerning intimacy. Your line “Eyes smoldering in the candle light”, was extremely riveting, this nine begs the reader to read on.
Your line “Touch shows the words that cannot be spoken to the ear”, was a painted brush stroke that made this word painting in my opinion.
The line “Your sounds are all you need to say” brought to me this thought, some words uttered from the soul are so beautiful and complex they can only be uttered as sounds understood by ones soul mate. A very beautiful poem.

Blessings, Laughing-Bear

[Layla J Omorose]

very good. Love is such a powerful thing that sometimes it cannot be expressed by simple words. It needs to be expressed and this poem does a good job of expressing it. I enjoyed this poem...good job

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

beautiful metaphorical dance of poetic touch~

[quinfinn]

"let this moment tattoo your soul" what a wonderfully clever line. i am envious of this one, for you are shining brightly as a beacon to all who love or have loved and
you do it in such exquisite form. absolutely brilliant.

[E.V. Black]

Beautfiul.

[Sunni Davis]

I love the passionate emotions in your poem. The last two lines are my favorite.