Hues

I’ve always wanted to go to that enchanted place

It’s filled with curves and peaks

Like the swell of a body

Winding roads lead to magical places where beauty is natural

Its texture varies from area to area

Mountainous to soft

Collar bone to cheek

Colors of variation litter the land

Some are soft and gentle

Skin tone and eye color

Others show its strength and endurance

Hair color and lip stain

The climate is one to behold

Collected and mesmerizing are the winds that give it life

The exhale and inhale of the lungs

The waters are warm and inviting, pooling and surrounding the surface

Its peaks are hot and dangerous yet mystifying

Dare not defy the anger of passion

The eruptions bring life and destroy it

The words emitted from the vocal cords

The true amazement though lies within the hues

The colors of the soul

The eyes of the individual

Multi-hued and captivating

It embodies the soul of beauty in a form of rarity

Never to be seen anywhere else

Truly an enchanted place

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Yes woman are beautiful and every woman is different. Woman are the gifts to a lucky man and will test their mates for a lifetime. I enjoyed your poem. Your description and story was amazing. Complete poem was very good. Thank you for a outstanding poem.
Coyote

[Suzy Q]

I know this is a little late. I'm VERY behind on my read requests... But this was very well written and it was very descriptive, I enjoyed it from beginning to end.

[Calypso]

AMAZING! Wow. You described this poem so well and how your mind works.

[Layla J Omorose]

I couldn't have said it better myself...great writing.

[Aurora Lynn]

I liked the way you set out this poem. I could tell that it was about the beauty of a woman, but you hid it just well enough to make it very poetic. Your word choice was very sophisticated. Just one suggestion though. In line sixteen, I think that you should seperate it into two lines. Instead of

'The waters are warm and inviting, pooling and surrounding the surface',

I would suggest you say

'The waters are warm and inviting
Polling and surrounding ths surface.'

Just a little thing that caught my eye. Other than that I really enjoyed the poem. Well done!
~Aurora

[NoneOfYourBusiness akaK..]

electric curves of sensate art~ divine imagery~

[quinfinn]

metaphorically speaking, i get the sense that you are personifying the human form.
this is a fine piece of poetry, laced with ambiguity and profound sense of purpose.
it is a delicate balance of hither and thither and gives me goosebumps reading. very nicely done.

[Jess Holden]

Such beautiful imagry :) Like I could actually see it all myself. :) a real treat to the minds eye

[*[[ Cadence ]]*]

wow...very nice poem (:

[Sunni Davis]

Very well written, beautiful tribute to all that is woman. Great job!