That Girl pt. 2

She's a breath of fresh air, like a mountain breeze,

I breathe her in, a calm washes over me,

Her soulful eyes are warm, and full of life,

Like a fire on a cold winters night,

She talks like a book that you can't put down,

Enjoying every word, imagining every sight and sound,

Her smile is like a child's laugh, so beautiful and real,

Oh, that girl is magical with the way she makes me feel.

Reviews

[Lydia Shutter]

The pure adoration in this write is so sweet. You describe an almost angelic cherubic seraph. Wonderful imagery. I liked the way you chose to describe her with nature’s beauty. Enchantingly romantic. Lydi**

[The Girl Who Loved Too Much]

Thank you, Lydia. I would, in fact, describe her as angelic. And natures beauty is the purest and most beautiful to me, so of course.