Rise and Fall

You tell me what you think..

I rise, 

I fall, 

I conquer,

My only demise will be my departure.

I scream, 

I laugh, 

I cry, 

My only flaw cant be seen from the outside.

But us with broken wings still fly, 

even with all of the questionable eyes, 

blinded by the irrelevant gawk,

hindered by intellectual talk.

Falling into every similarity,

possessed by what's fused into humanity, 

simple, yet so complex, 

as you do what you're supposed to do next.

Even as I fall, I rise, 

to conquer what's on the inside, 

I cry, as I laugh,

just to scream as I crash.

 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

Life is a wild ride. I had to learn meditation and yoga to stop the craziness.
"Even as I fall I rise,
to conquer whats on the inside,
I cry as I laugh,
just to scream as I crash."
I do understand the above lines. Many emotions are felt daily. Hard to keep our sanity. Thank you my friend for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[OhSnapShley]

& thank you for taking the time to review and make my head that much bigger. Glad you can control the crazy in your life! A lot of people do not have that ability.

-OhSnap

[Coyote Poetry]

Took my worst day to learn meditation. And you are welcome.

[Dr. YumnaKay]

"But us with broken wings still fly,
even with all of the questionable eyes,"

That's a beautiful write up with a full of hope message! I think it's all about seeing the brighter side of the picture and knowing that eventually we'll succeed.

A small thing : you need to put in apostrophes here and there plus add in commas too.

I enjoyed reading this. Nicely penned 👍

[OhSnapShley]

Appreciate the feedback. and yes I will have to edit and make a few changes. Thanks for your input and glad you liked it..
-OhSnap

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You're welcome! It was a pleasure 😊

[Najam Us Saher]

Wow. I loves the last lines. It shows how you are witholding your emotions and feelings and trying to be strong. It is really hard to do so. You have captured the exact feelings and have written so beautifully. I liked it. ☺

[OhSnapShley]

Thanks for taking the time to review. Glad you liked it (:

[Najam Us Saher]

No need of thanks.