This is just a little something i threw together this morning thinking about my soul mate. everyone has a soul mate, im lucky to have found mine already..
They say,
opposites attract,
& I never would have believed them if we didnt cross paths,
If im the sun,
you are the moon,
and together,
we make the world turn,
as it spins,
so do we,
enchanted and unknowingly,
you're so dark,
and im so light,
but a mixture of us is such a site,
we're just two souls,
who happened to meet,
fell in love,
ever so deep,
and in those depths,
we became one,
two souls bound,
forever in love,
when you cast the rain,
I bring out the sun,
The puddles you left behind,
I'll quickly clear up,
if your the cold at the end of december,
im the hot summer air in mid august or end of september,
A soulmate is definitely something everyone should be blessed with but it is so extremely rare. Me being a person that believe a deep love to and/or from a significant other is extremely rare, reading this poem made me fantasize of such beautiful feeling. Wonderful poem.
And you have made another one I LOVE... The mood of this piece... is just up my alley these days. I love how you show the intertwining of two souls... very cool. Thank you for sharing.
..Misty
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad im up your alley with this one ;)
I do believe opposite attract.
"If im the sun,
you are the moon,
and together,
we make the world turn,
as it spins,
so do we, "
I liked the above lines and I believe two of the same would bore the other to death. Need someone to test us. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thank you for the kind review. We definitely have to let our guard down and do things out of the nor.. read moreThank you for the kind review. We definitely have to let our guard down and do things out of the norm. Glad you liked it.
First 2 lines are so so true and I really can relate and as I read on, a lot more of it too I related to. It's wonderful when you have found the one and this piece which I read; for me was an enchanting read filled with emotions and which everybody at least once in a lifetime should feel.
Kudos to you.
Mark.
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Thanks Mark. Glad you can relate, as it is such a wonderful thing. I appreciate the review.
Though I don't believe in this soulmate thing, still it was nice to read it.. It's good indeed that you found yours ☺
I enjoyed reading this.. Bit dreamy quality to it but beautifully so ☺
Posted 8 Years Ago
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8 Years Ago
Well it means something if you cant even relate and still enjoyed the poem. Thanks for the review.
You are welcome! I did!
I was wondering what's the logic behind your pen name? Just curious .. read moreYou are welcome! I did!
I was wondering what's the logic behind your pen name? Just curious 😉
8 Years Ago
I actually do photography and thats my business name . Its stuck with me though and now I kinda use .. read moreI actually do photography and thats my business name . Its stuck with me though and now I kinda use it all around.
I've been writing for most of my life. Its always been my outlet. So I started this page to get some more of my stuff out there. If you like something or even if you hate it I want to know. I think fe.. more..