Bliss

Sometimes people share something that only they together can explain.

Bliss-

it's the touch from your fingertips, 

that sends chills down my spine, 

the look of such want,

that bleeds from your eyes,

the little whispers that find their way to my ear, 

the bumps that rise atop my skin,

as you tell me just what i want to hear.

Or when you pull me closer,

and start to kiss up and down my neck, 

holding me in place to make sure nothing is missed, 

in this place of bliss, 

there is no time, 

only me and you, 

simply moved by desire. 

But when we have to leave, 

we start to take it slow, 

we dont want to leave this place, 

its the only good we know, 

so we fight, 

but we never win, 

because once we leave our bliss, 

who knows when we'll meet again.. 

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

After the sweet taste of bliss. We always want some more.
"because once we leave our bliss,
who knows when we'll meet again.. "
The above lines are true. After sweet bliss. Imagination make next meeting more sweet. Thank you for sharing the amazing poetry.
Coyote

[OhSnapShley]

You are so welcome for sharing and thank you for your kind words. Im glad you like it. Bliss is not something everyone gets to experience so its nice to put it into words. Glad I was able to do that here.

[Coyote Poetry]

I enjoyed the poem and you are welcome.

[fadingtale]

Love the images conjured up with the word choices you included in this poem. Beautiful! Thank you for submitting for all about love contest!

[Sir Drift & Mr. Pulse]

The love that seeps from our pores and slyly cradles into our lungs, the touch that sends sparks to our spine and shocks our heart to beat faster, the smell of love that entangles our soul. Such a beautiful writing topic. The Passion, the desire, the emotion, the LOVE

[OhSnapShley]

& I love how you described it! Thanks for your awesome review and thoughts.

-OhSnap

[YanZeros]

Sweet, romantic and oozing with love! This really is a perfect bliss! lovin' this poetry and it's getting hot in here! nicely written and the details are very well expressed OhSnapShley :)

[OhSnapShley]

Thank you so much!

[YanZeros]

you're welcome! :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

This is so romantic and beautiful!! I loved it! And that colour is my favourite!! 😊

[OhSnapShley]

Glad you liked it, Im trying to get out of my comfort zone and do more like this one. :)

[Dr. YumnaKay]

You are welcome! And that's what writing is about.. To stretch the wings that have been caged for too long...