He loves-He loves me not

He loves me,

He loves me not, 

Picking flowers, 

Is all I got, 

So I look to the sky above, 

A sign that this is really love, 

Picking the petals, 

one, 

two, 

three, 
can you tell if he really loves me?

I think he does, 
I think he does, 
he told me once, 
but I soon forgot, 
I tried to remember the day and time, 
but only a dream came to mind, 
was it in this dream I seen, 

where he tells me he truly loves me?

I fall asleep to the thought, 
I think about him an awful lot, 
Maybe thats why when I close my eyes, 
hes always there wearing a smile, 
he lifts my chin and kisses my cheek, 

and reminds me how much he's in love with me. 

Reviews

[Andre Peterson]

This is almost like a sweet dream. It has a lot of passion and desire written into it. This is very nice.

[OhSnapShley]

Well thank you Andre.

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

The super romantic one! Wonderful piece of art & my fav for sure.

[OhSnapShley]

Aw, why thank you!

[Writer at last! Sky ~]

Hey your most welcome!

[michelle]

oh my God...I love this and love you! I've just started going through your profile and I can't stop reading, I haven't got time to review them all because I would be here all night! But, I love the eye that you seem to have for writing about things that make me feel powerfully. It's difficult to make somebody feel something but this, your poem 'Mother, Mother' and the one about bliss....all so powerful and emotive. congratulations on having such a talent. I'm really inspired!

[OhSnapShley]

You have no idea how much that means to me! Im almost taken aback as I have not received so much praise before :) No worries on not reviewing everyone of them. Im so glad you can feel powerful and being inspired is what its all about.

-OhSnap

[michelle]

yeah...I'm a groupie now!

[OhSnapShley]

Ha! Groupies are so welcomed! ;)

[tanmay7551]

When in dilema only heart speaks the truth and only mind repents for the mistakes.

Well written, speaks about just everyone's situation trying to decide out of confusion and gets lost in their own to finally conclude.

[OhSnapShley]

Great way to view this one. Thank you for your kind feedback.

[tanmay7551]

You are welcome!

[Coyote Poetry]

Real love become more sweeter and more needed with time. I liked the flow of thoughts leading to very good ending. We do need reminders that love is alive and well. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[OhSnapShley]

Thank you for reading. I thought of this topic and it just came together. There is no one there to love her, it is all a dream. Not sure I conveyed that message correctly.

[Coyote Poetry]

We need dreams and if we are lucky. Love find us and you are welcome.