Can yOu find ME?

Can yOu find ME?

A Poem by Odyssey

50 years in the neighborhood
in the big white hous
is where mr. WINSTON stayed
he sits on his porch
and watch the neighborhood KIds pLay
his mind wonders
about a game 30 years before
the current date
                             
:
                            
 :
                            
 :
                             
:
                             
not a sound
nor a peak
chiLdrEn smile
while playing
                      
hiDe & seek
                       
THE joy
                      
the laughter
 
the precious babies having innocent fun
 
ready or not....................here i come
             
the young man replied
                      
to the youth
          
he was dressed for the occasion
     
dark clothes, black gloves, black boots

              
the CHILDREN was hiding
                            
hours
                               
:
                             
days
                               
:
                            
years
              
which was a strange case
           
those babies remained hidden
                         
and no one
               
found they're hiding place

© 2010 Odyssey


Author's Note

Odyssey
I was experimenting with my creative side a few years ago when I wrote this. I hope you enjoyed it and found what was hiding within

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kinda uneasy, but makes you think who are watching your kids from a distance and up close. great write, i'm glad that i read it. its gonna keep my eyes closer on my nieces, nephews, and kids (when i have some).

Posted 14 Years Ago


Great write that is somewhat scary...since I have grandchildren I really am concerned about all the abuse of children....Sunflower

Posted 14 Years Ago



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