I Do

I Do

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Last writing in the Fourth Session: Eventually

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I Do

 

A reflection in the window, still,

Soaked- cross the wood, frame

My soul into yours- will,

Anew this last name, I do.

 

Your life without mine,

Every fight that’s learned, true
I’ll drink, share the blood wine

It’ll be, with you

 

…and I do, from the bottom of my heart

With its tapestry of art, I do.

In the time that’s passed laws

From the love that once was, I do

…I do.

 

There’s laughter all around, your

Hearts, always been- in the right place,

You’re all I’ll ever look for

Your nothing, I could replace, I do.

 

This life without, your-own,

Never dreamt of it- differently

In beauty, how our loves shown

Derived, from it gently

 

…and I do, from the bottom of my soul

In the eyes of my own, I do

With the joy that’s been ours

From the love that’s held scars, I do

…I do.

 

…and I won’t, hurt or inflict you,

Only love, I’ll shower and you’ll see

I swear to always come through

With this ring, “Will you marry me?”

Will you?

 

Baby, will you marry me?

 

“I do…”


I Do

Written by; Joshua Randall

Session IV: Eventually



© 2012 Octob3r Star


Author's Note

Octob3r Star
End of the Fourth Session. Thank you for reading; Eventually.

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I DO like this! Such beauty in the descriptions of love growing between two souls. I think partnership is something that should be eternal when you say I Do! ~ Jude :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


I like how you expressed your desire and offer of marriage in this poem. I like the flow of emotion and the very good ending. A excellent poem.
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Posted 12 Years Ago


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beautiful sentiment..isn't this how you should feel when you commit to another human being..

Posted 12 Years Ago


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