Pillow talk

A Poem by Rosegal95

Pillows are supposed to hold you head, your dreams....let you rest and prepare for tomorrow.
Pillows are not supposed to hold your tears and your makeup stains...they are not supposed to hold your nightmares and make you dread the morning...
I think mines deffective.
Do you think they'll let me return it?

© 2016 Rosegal95

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Suzy Hazelwood

And mine too - very amusing!! :oD If only pillows could talk, they'd have a lot to say about us I'm sure. My main problem is getting a comfortable one!

Posted 8 Years Ago

AaronFreitas

I like this one Savannah... the thought of the tears we shed and, well not for me, but for women the makeup they lose into those pillows is an honest tale of what happens to our pillows. We can't hide our emotions when we rest our heads. Only if we could exchange it all for a better reality :) Nice work... on the first "you" it is supposed to be "your" you just left off the r. I enjoyed it :)

Posted 8 Years Ago

8 Years Ago

Ah! Thanks for catching that! I appreciate it! Also, thank you for your thoughts. I like seeing that.. read more

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Added on February 2, 2016
Last Updated on February 2, 2016
Tags: Nightmares, depression, pillows, sleeping

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Rosegal95

Baxter, MN

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I have always liked to write, ever since I was very young. I was constantly writing short stories and making up new concepts in my mind. I love to mainly write free verse, it helps to clear my mind. b.. more..