Oh my, I LOVE this line in particular, "She got sick of the pain, the September rot." You are growing so much in these newer rhymes of yours! Thank you for reaching out to her, she could always use it, we all could, but she needs this more so now, not many are deserving of getting help like she is, ya know? She helps so many but few help her. Kinda familiar...
Wow, this is really good. Way better than I could ever write. I can tell it's a Robin poem, and it was very well done. Good job, and thanks for the RR>
I love the last part of "The demon turns away from the screen with a smirk". That is exactly what I imagine happened. I also think you are growing in your writing. This is wonderful. Adding it to my Library =]
Oh my, I LOVE this line in particular, "She got sick of the pain, the September rot." You are growing so much in these newer rhymes of yours! Thank you for reaching out to her, she could always use it, we all could, but she needs this more so now, not many are deserving of getting help like she is, ya know? She helps so many but few help her. Kinda familiar...