-Autumn Escape-

When healing comes as tears,

and these trials overcome our life.

What does it take to know your here?

~

Sometimes pain heals through raindrops,

desperate hearts beg the blade to stop.

~

Can't the safety you bring come

from the pen?

But please stay here, I can't do this alone again.

~

I need your love as a shield,

in this endless battlefeild.

Tears pour down all the wihle,

help me, Lord, I need to smile.

~

Autumn sight your glory surround.

Winter love, your love around.

Reviews

[Gleb Zavlanov]

This is gorgeous, melancholy and deep. Great job!

[SilentVerses]

Bitter sweet and lovely, gentle the words caress the reader with their gentle and melancholy meaning, like a breeze the roll over one another, compassionate and sad but with an elegant beauty that holds up a flower of grace to the style and technique used. simple and wonderful.

[Jaded Mermaid]

This is poetically insightful...it's like walking down a road as you read and you can actually feel the many winds of color pass through your body cleansing you.