-Winter Glaze-

Depression clouds.

Dying roses,

winter glaze.

Garden weeds,

lies unspoken,

summer blaze.

~

Hopless oceans,

inkless pens

rotting compare,

backstabbing secrets,

told by lying friends.

~

Anger cold.

Clever stories told.

~

True love goes through

the hardest concrete.

Screams below 6 feet

Reviews

[☯]

A very dark and shortly described poem. The metaphors and imagery was unique, and thoughtful. Great write. :)

[Alicia Hirshey]

This is very different. I love the style. I absolutely love it.

[Kayla K]

Unique, and I loved the descriptive words used to paint a brilliant picture.

[WynterPhoenix]

This is a brilliant piece.

[Jaded Mermaid]

So uniquely concrete.

[Dearantlers]

This poem is beautiful! Thanks so much for the read request!

[TheRavenQueer]

Wow... I really love this!! Brilliantly written, well done! And there's some beautiful imagery in it. 100/100 from me, and it's definitely one of my favourites. =)

One typo... "Hopless" should probably be "hopeless". That's my guess at least. Haha!

[stars are far]

really nice