-Elixar Breeze-

Pollen imagine, blessed sneeze.
Sunrise vortex, elixar breeze.
Shade patio, forensics sluthe.
Tulip weed, sweetgum truth.
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Peeling bark, white rose.
Morning dew, turkey pose.
Ant hill wonder, wind breeze swirl,,
Backyard beauty buble bee twirl.
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Arial spiral, diary lines.
Ribbon suit design.
Mother nature dress,
Polka dot impress.
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Notebook lines, memorial shoot.
Scarf silk, magnolia root.
Lavender sense, revolver times.
Flowerpot shimmer, fairy rhymes.

Author's Note

Backyard dreams...

Reviews

[☯]

I loved reading this! The sunlit imagery and words blossomed my mind, and made me wonder. An amazingly written and composed poem. I really enjoyed reading it. :)

[Alicia Hirshey]

I love your style. You really know how to paint a picture in the readers mind.

[Kayla K]

Beautiful. You have a great style, with so much imagery.

[panheadpigments]

Thank you everyone for all your kind comments!

[Jaded Mermaid]

Poetically in style. This is your best to me.

[Dearantlers]

Wow, that's beautiful. The rhyming scheme is amazing, and just the way you did it is amazing! You are an amazing poet!! Thanks so much for the read request!!

[stars are far]

you are really great writer
i loved this a lot