-Decay Spiral-

Decay spiral

Suicide viral.

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Happiness decay. From the wrists blood drops.

This pain an addiction, The blade won't stop.

She dances with death, the blood drips on the sink.

She's gone this far, hopeless now, her heart on the brinnk.

~

Old ballet slippers, her gradma's old quilt,

Can't save her life, this blossom has begun to wilt.

She seeks for hope, as she looks to the stars.

The blade lies to her, as it creates more scars.

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Blade lies.

Demon cries.

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Slipping away while taking another pill.

Mulling over thought that their words drill.

Her eyes are searking for any source of light.

But you can't see when you've fallen into the night.

~

Her fake smile is obvious when she's that dark.

But she's ignored as she draws more blood, making the marks.

She grew up with lies, and window shatters.

Don't try to save her, it doesn't matter.

~

Truth fears,

Angel tears.

Reviews

[Disillusioned]

You are boldly painting the angst of the struggle. Word choices conjuring up some vivid images, and pulsing with some raw emotion. Good job.

[VelvetRosetta]

A sad poem but very well written, maybe I should go back and ck out your age...you write with thoughts of someone with experience.
I like this piece alot.

[☯]

A very depressing and haunting poem to read. The thoughts and actions fit perfectly. The loss of hope, and depression characterized nicely. An amazing piece :)

[TheRavenQueer]

Agreed, Kayla. Definitely one of the best. Wow!! I love it. :)

[panheadpigments]

Thank you everyone for you kind comments!

[Kayla K]

I think this is your best. It's stunning.

[Alicia Hirshey]

This was a brilliant piece. I can relate to this so much right now.

[WynterPhoenix]

"But you can't see when you've fallen into the night."

Brilliant. Dark. Love it!

[Dearantlers]

It's beautiful! I love it. Thanks so much for the read request!

[stars are far]

nice one
really very nice
love it .. keep goin !!