[Honey Plunge]

This one is pretty old, but I never got around to posting it so....

Honey lies.

A bitter sweet,

Lies told.

To those you meet...

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Broken hearts, and dreams despair.

Sicking down deep.

Grying eyes, told lies,

make it hard to fall asleep.

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Right or wrong? This gossip,

Blurrs my sight.

I see these people,

Avoid the things that are right.

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Can't decide, I'm so scared.

My mind is becoming sore.

Confused, dying, can't breathe.

Can't take this anymore.

Author's Note

Tell me if I mis-spelled somthing.

Reviews

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I really liked reading this. I like the way you added the short hit of words to emphasize the way you're confused and unsure. I also liked the words you used. The flow is also really good, and I could also relate to this. An amazing job :)