Starlight

In my dreams,

I am surrounded by nothingness,

Forever seeking a source of hope, a source of light.

The darkest thoughts

From the recesses of my imagination

Crawl forward, also seeking something,

A source of weakness, a source of fear.

But as these thoughts engulf me,

I see you.

Like a shining star glimmering in the midnight sky,

Lighting the way in the darkness,

You lead me away from the terror,

From the horrors that swallow me whole at night.

You save me.

Reviews

[Tex]

A very good write. You didn't spell it all out so you leave a lot for us to fill in (that is a good thing) are you speaking of some one who has died? or a mentor? or a lover? we can fill in the blank with the person we have in our life who fills this roll, and as a result it means more to us.

Great job, loved it.

[Stephen]

Lovely .. what an adorable write! I like the beats of the words and their proper functioning with lines.. so much emotions and true---love feelings are getting expressed through this poem. Well written!

[Eile MacIntyre]

Wonderful picture that you wove with these words. It's very captivating.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Fabulous darling, I can just picture the warm, glowing star at the end of a cold, dark dream.

[Alexa Tasch]

wow wicked pretty! I loved it

[Julie Beth]

hey hey hey you should use this for your english project if yur doing the Imagination section cause this was awesome and you should get an A for this being awesome on your english project :D

[DontBlink158]

Wow, i really like this! It easy for me to picture what you're saying, i really enjoyed it. Great job!!