Immortal Love

Come with me, my love

And let us embrace.

We shall defy the laws and let

Our affection thrive.

I will forever be yours,

Your faithful servant,

Your soulmate.

The passion will flow

From our hearts

And into each others’ souls.

Although I belong to another,

Let us recreate a classic tale.

I shall be your Mina,

And you my Dracula.

Leave Harker behind

And go against Bram Stoker’s words.

We shall be a modern alternate ending

To an ingenious story.

So kiss me my love,

And in that kiss,

Take my life away.

Reviews

[quinfinn]

brilliant. awesome, uniquely charming, sensual and deliberate. this is a polished and beautifully written poem which delves into the classics with a delicious modern twist. color me envious and impressed! you get the whole box of cookies on this one...and ...i think i shall add this to my library. as a matter of fact, i know i shall!

[Tasha]

This was amazing, I loved it.
♥ Ta'Shandra

[rockgrl911]

when i got to, " although i belong to another, let us recreate a classic tale" i thought of dracula, and sure enough, it was. I loved it, it was amazing as all of your poems are, and i want more poems like this

[Calypso]

Romantic and dark. I love it

[Julie Beth]

awesome job i love it :)

[Jesse Jacques]

i like how you used non-fiction in a sort of fiction-y poem. awesome job. loved it. :D no spelling or grammar mistakes either.

[Eile MacIntyre]

Let us recreate a classic tale...

Loved that line.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Pretty Lauren, very pretty.

[Daydreamer54]

I like this. it sounded very poetic. i guess you have a thing for old moveis?.,..