Abandonment

Left alone in the darkness,

Hark! Does someone approach?

Nay, tis only the dismal wind

Ever taunting at my secludedness.

Why have they abandoned me?

Their growing affections

Only loosened their tie

To the planet Earth,

To the humanity they held dear.

Where have they gone?

Has love’s wings

Taken them into the clouds

Never to be seen again?

None shall ever know.

They dared to go the distance,

But their eyes

Were clouded by infatuation.

Delicate, sweet humanity,

Never loosen your grip on me.

Reviews

[Calypso]

Love can be dark. Peace.

[Grace Catherine C.]

Aw. so sad, but it was good too Lauren.

[Amber Tasch]

amazing as always!

[Eile MacIntyre]

I love the word Hark. It's awesome.
That last sentence is stupendous. I cannot describe fully how much I love it.

[Dahlia Phoenix]

Wonderful! Wonderful! Wonderful!
I love the font and the feeling behind the words.

[quinfinn]

i absolutely love this! your use of words is teasingly delicious.