Wonderland

Scribbling, scrawling, writing away

till darkness engulfs the mind

and as the light fades away

a new world you will find.

Creatures unnamed will dance around

till your brain begins to wear.

When you finally pass out,

the creatures will shout,

then stand near you and stare.

Some say you need to be as mad as a hatter

to survive this mystical land of your view,

but it is not so

and you should know

the very best people are too.

But soon the land disappears

along with all the creatures it would seem.

As you awake you begin to realize

it was all just a dream.

Reviews

[K.G]

i dont know why but i just can picture a girl writing and doodling in a book, then suddenly the words and pictures come to life. :3 i think its cute( i hope that not weird >.

[L. Catherine]

Thanks! It's cool you interpreted it that way, cauz when I wrote this about three years ago, I don't even remember if it was supposed to have one singular meaning. :P Thanks again!

[K.G]

oh hahaha ^.^ i tend to be that creative lol and your wellcome ^.^

[..]

Such a deep write, I enjoyed the imagery.
Nicely done.

[Black]

a very good poem
it made me think of this song from avril lavigne
keep on writing

[TheElfPrincess]

A very good poem, made me think of Alice in Wonderland :) I loved the movie and I love this poem. Well done.

[joshua deathdealer]

Nice write. Kudos.

[*~DreamDeamon~*]

Wow really had me think back to Alice in Wonderland.. a fav movie of mine and you depicted it and added our own stly. I like this poem alot
Great Write!

[quinfinn]

i love poems about dreams and i love different interpretations and analogies of the dream within the dream, this is perfect, chillingly haunting yet serene, great write!

what a dreamer! :) your imagination runs so wild. imagination is more important that intelligence. cheers. keep it up.

[FJ Davis]

Good write!

[Ben Taylor]

Nice :)
The rhyming was a tad intrusive, but barely :)
And I always write stuff until I get to tired to stay awake, also :)