Wonderland

Scribbling, scrawling, writing away

till darkness engulfs the mind

and as the light fades away

a new world you will find.

Creatures unnamed will dance around

till your brain begins to wear.

When you finally pass out,

the creatures will shout,

then stand near you and stare.

Some say you need to be as mad as a hatter

to survive this mystical land of your view,

but it is not so

and you should know

the very best people are too.

But soon the land disappears

along with all the creatures it would seem.

As you awake you begin to realize

it was all just a dream.

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A wonderful wonderland of poetic realizations. Excellent...:)..................

[Neon]

What a wonderful wonderland .. i liked the poem even the color you chosen to disperse over the words's totally suited with the theme of the poem .. beautiful work.

[Richard]

OMG this is fantastic I love your fairy tale themes and imagery and your very fantastic sort of ideas I think we should collaborate :)

[Rose Kavanagh]

I like this poem - it's fun and whimsical and doesn't take itself too seriously :)

[Alisha Heistand]

wow. I love it!

[L. Catherine]

Thanks Alisha!!! :)

[Alisha Heistand]

you're welcome Mary Poppins!!!

[L. Catherine]

Hahahaha XD We aren't even in Disney yet!

[Alisha Heistand]

Doesn't matter, you're the riencarnation that walks among us, mocking

[L. Catherine]

Hahahaha thank you! I just hope that will be enough to get me the part in Disney :)

[junaid altaf]

so u been to wonderland!!

[KurKota]

Very pleasant reading. I like the expression of your imaginative characters . Nice work

[L. Catherine]

Thank you!!!

[Whiskurz]

I love pieces like this....Such a fun read my friend....Whisk

[L. Catherine]

Thanks!!!

[AWickedMoon]

Wow, I must say this poem is simply fantastic!

[L. Catherine]

Thank you!!!

[rnuff]

This is somply amazing, love the flow.

[L. Catherine]

Thanks!