Torturous Seconds

Watching the clock

The minutes tick by as I wait but nothing changes

I stare out the window where everything is faded

And I wonder what happened to the pages

Of a life when I wasn't so jaded.

Reviews

[Absentee Reality Check]

i like this it has a lyricy feel to it, maybe you should try writing more along the same lines and make it a song...Anyway it just hits me as a really cool poem even though it is so short.

[Red_Queen]

Loved the rhyming.
haha im reading them faster than you can post them it's a goodthing your on now though and posting so many. You really made my day with these last few pieces.

[Sangria Green]

Nice. Really, I like it. Nice and simple with a good tone.