Aerona's Bethlehem

Inaugural Star Of Bethlehem. Spun out in lush ebony to gleam with delirium.

For this she will play fancy with Lucifer, moist mouth the Martyr.

With arachnid eyes she is patient. But then too long on the crowned crest.

Be not confused with worship. This innocent of the Cosmos is a

Tempting tyrian. He is patient for the world of nothing.

Feathered Aerona has crisped and darked with your touch. But with this

She is immortal. So alive in your bittersweet tempter’s cocoon.

Soon she will lust for your master shroud. With this, her devils will dance.

And with charred wings, she will nestle at your neck.  She will whisper sharply.

“You who have darked this dove has made her a raven.”

Then animal cries by soured obsidian will sing to our mistress. 

Reviews

[Omar Fendri]

This poem demands rereading which I honestly did it twice.
I have been blown away by the magic which beats in each line of this poem... Artistically presented, Literally written, imaginatively painted...
"He is patient for the world of nothing.
Feathered Aerona has crisped and darked with your touch"
Such vivid structures haunted by mystery are in this piece of work and the last lines are the icing on the cake...I ADMIRE IT.

[Chris]

Gamers... can't live with them NOR without them...

What we see is not always what IS - to be seen or not, anywhere else. Which perception is your reality and which isn't?

Well set stage.

Take care,
Chris

[Jeremy Baker]

Spooky and redolent with imagery of the underworld and brings fears into sharp focus. Awesome imagery - literally! I shivered by the end of this poem - great writing!

[Megan Step]

It is quite sinister, which makes my appeal to it stronger. This poem imaginative and dark. Probably one of the best descriptive poems I have read so far. Keep up the great work.
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[nicolo]

I got shivers.

[PrincessZeldaWannabe]

Really beautiful and dark and just plain brilliant!