Dream Girl

I met my dream girl long ago
By god our love was long ago
Yet I see her every night
Whenever I close my eyes

Shes the stars to my night
I know I smile at night
But everyday I wake up
At the moment of the break-up
Wishing , hoping, trying my hardest to close my eyes and then make up
But every time I just start to cry
As the day is my night
I kiss the stars goodbye
Enduring a hellish nightmare until tonight

Reviews

[laceyjane23]

great job! i really enjoyed this poem, you put some emotion in there and thats where i feel we get our best pieces from. keep on writing!
laceyjane