Valentine

old poem I did for a Valentine contest online.

Valentines poem

Ejay

My eyes see you no more.
You are gone
I know not what for.

With all my fear ,
Days pass me by.
Looking for answers
Life chooses to deny.

I ask the heavens for one more day
Every night I think on hours
What I would say

I think back on the times we shared
The games we played
The void that is left
Has made my soul wish I never cared

My somber is broken
By the dawn's coming light.
I have fractured myself
Driven by this sorrowed night

I have to heal myself
By some god given way
But then again it was he
Who took my brother Ejay

You asked for a poem
One reflecting the heart of mine
It's not a lover or some other mate
But the love of a brother is my Valentine.

Reviews

[Elanra]

It is really beautiful. I loved this. Deep and touching. Rly good rhymed and captivating flow. Well done!

[LadyNaida]

This is beautiful, passionate.

[Platus]

Very nice. My day is better after having read your poem. *claps quietly*