Wit & Remorse

Passed by threes

Reveal wit's end with the left

Beginning, cascade, menial and

Masquerade in shadows of doubt

Led to a desperate path, one with

Which return is fairly exclusive

Obtrusive remarkable, times in longer

Nights inclined to prevent one form

To another, sanctioned breached

Besieged by maddening sense

Logic of the likes none can refuse

Sobering, confound and abused

A darkened appeal, a crack to the

Windows of the former reality

One which you love to coincide

Inside of the head, learned of

Tragedy to punish but to all in the end

Progress, push, diminish and left

Forever inept and irreconcilably so

Disheartening awakening to least of worries

Sting and stain to the muse

Rob you of confusion that grant

The bliss

I try

Submit

You walked off, no regret; lest

You admit.

Author's Note

Reviews

[ObscurityNone]

And that's how it goes, and how life is... elusive, unforgivable, at times, unforgetable even more, harded with self-lament, peace, but rocky mountains, dust, travels, mind travels, lust.... and it never stops, until you talk, talk and walk, behind, and beyond the self, expressive soul... of yours :D lovely work! Chapeau!

- Elisista

[ObscurityNone]

That review was lovely work in itself, thank you very much, Hermana. x)

You're most welcome sweet bro X

[stellasautelle]

I love it :) very well written

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Thanks, Stella

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~ superbly written... ~ i wonder too about the ones that "walk-off"... there's no way to predict when or how they'll "admit" to anything... yet one hopes that bridges burnt will be mended at some point in time through acceptance and understanding... that's what this piece is about...for me... i dunno if you meant for it to be read this way or not...

[ObscurityNone]

What I mean is besides the point, it matters only to me; and your interpretation is what is important to you, and I would prefer that distinction. Thank you very much, you do me honor. x)

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~ you're very welcome...