Beyond Threshold

Atten.

Step in rift

Challenges and held in underscore

Pushed, and prod

Leaving weak with the dust

Strange name once past

Put to the test

Hold broke, burned and choked

Baffling, the mechanic

Spun gears to grinding point

Soon to smooth, then soothe

Flesh motion, no longer burning

Learnt of passing, the special brand

Non-interest, guide us

Trust it, and never let in.

Author's Note

Reviews

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This is beautifully mysterious, fascinating and metaphorically ...
I can do read it 10 times, and still exploring this new
born meanings by your words. Very good and sharply written.
I love it.

- Elisa

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Thank you, I am glad you can find that much enjoyment from my writing.

Yeah, I already did, I do read you a lot, and others too... and keep each story, or poem in mind, during the day, I just needed to review this right now. For you do so much for me already! :)

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Always at your service...Sister. x)

That makes sis smile :) you're the best x