Lyhn

Introduction: Lyhn

High elven maiden, throwing hands out like claws

Stretching out into hearts and reforming to dust

Approached by sneaks, who attempted to get a drop

Swift strokes like that penned of a writ, elegant, confident and superbly dangerous

She slew the fools, with such;

Fierce unhidden grace is borne into her face

Never will she flee

Never will she cease

Bold, honorable, determined, and strong-willed

Smash sword against stone, or send the ethereal to the abyss

There is simply no stopping.

 

Author's Note

Reviews

[ObscurityNone]

There is simply your brilliant mind for-seeing...
Wow, so loved this piece. Your created Lyhn
is a master elven maiden, far beyond many elven ones.
She has powers, and attitude like you see in a women.
In a nympf, or maiden, or elf.... it has the power,
that in real world is boring not is needed, nor even
noticed bro, *you know what I mean* ppl here
Are just reflecting, and working on proposed base.
Never listening to their inner core. You and me still do,
And I must say you, I'm grateful to that little tiny fact...

Your writes always abduct me, into new worlds, I need that
as I'm myself lile a dreamy philosopher and psychologe too,
I like your writing, and your cleverness from your age.
You're brilliant. X

And if my English is crap just say, I'm here to learn as a Dutch X

- Eli

[ObscurityNone]

Nooo, I absolutely adore your English. It's so.... all your own. Elisa speaks how Elisa speaks, and I would have it no other way, I enjoy reading it all, and understand it just as well. Thank you so much, Elisa. I look forward to your writing too. It throws me into a scene concieved out of that gorgeous mind of yours and both intrigues and stimulates me like no other.

That makes me smile... though. :) you're intelligent, and brilliant, I have a weak for you bro. Really. You will get published one day, just know it. X

[ObscurityNone]

Huhhh.. =o I didn't err I would probably really like that, but I wouldn't ever think anyone would themselves, think so. I am surprised, once more. x)

:) so modesty you are, that adorns you even more .... ;)

[ObscurityNone]

I'm not modest, just being honest. >_< Thank you, too much. Hahh

Yeah, I would said the same, lol..... we are too look a like. I was testing you :P

[ObscurityNone]

Heh, well I guess I passed your test. x)

INTP=er, =Architecht, I saw a lovely building for you, and...... :D

[ObscurityNone]

And? =o

Well you know that best :)

[ObscurityNone]

Is this another test? Dx (What building comes to mind is the body, mind, that type of thing)?

ha? The destroyed twin towers? LOL

[ObscurityNone]

Ohhhh! Interesting.. o_O You will have to explain, there are just too many possibilities to calculate, lol.

There are.... yep. Twin=you know, 911, 11, sept. 9, 9 is my holy lucky number though... :) it's the highest of all, countable. :D

[ObscurityNone]

Interesting... My lucky number has always been 3.. I was also born 3/30/93, and three comes up very often in my life.

3 is bibly holy. yes, much 3's, I have no holy's I'm 22-06-82, 3 is a holy proven, and lucky number. :) though.... but I must say, I do love you born in the month march. My hubby is too :)

[ObscurityNone]

Hehh, very nice. =) I suppose he must either be Pisces or Aries? Both differ immensely, lol.

LOL, yes, Pieces, :) With Cancer, goes so right..... ;-) hahahahaha

[ObscurityNone]

Yes, I have read that all the water signs are extremely compatible with eachother.

But yeah, INTP With INTJ? :)

[ObscurityNone]

They are actually what seem like a perfect match to me. Like it mentioned about the INTP never wanting to lead or follow, but only follow someone as competent and intelligent as them, well there you go that's you. An INTJ can bring structure, and discipline, while an INTP can bring abstract and innovative ideas. Of course that is just a brief look into the matter, there is surely much much more, and I would think if not all, than mostly positive.

That is perrrrfect, how you did studied it! I loved this answer. So so true.
:) makes me smile! across the too many miles.

[ObscurityNone]

I told you, I've spent the past 48 hours researching this whole thing. x)

You're such a clever lil b*****d :) luv ya!

[ObscurityNone]

Hahh, thank you very much. love you too, lady. =)

(for all people who think wrong, as a little brother I luv him) yes.

:) ♥

[ObscurityNone]

Precisely, anyone can tell which form of "love" I speak of by these two variants here, love & Love. Very, very.. different. (Not sarcasm).

So true! :) glad you mention that. On the same intention, and level.

[Miranda Richard]

What a lovely poem. It has stunning imagery, and great writing. Keep it up :)

[Muse]

You paint so much imagery while writing in brevity. Brilliant work.

[ObscurityNone]

Thank you, Miss Muse. x)

[Dalia]

Your note illustrated the theme actually, very interesting indeed, it draws a fine picture of the warrior - sorceress, wish you all the luck, and looking forward to read more :)

[ObscurityNone]

Thanks, Dalia.

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~ this is a fantastic word-portrait... perfectly etched... every element of her persona that you've described speaks volumes... "superbly dangerous" poet you are... :P

[ObscurityNone]

Heh, thank you serah. That means A LOT. x)

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~ you're very welcome... :)