With Selfish Deep

With Selfish Deep

A Poem by ObscurityNone
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There’s something in

The blood of fools

That lets them seep

Down into the liars

It ties with regret

Then simple wars

And all for in and all for want

Indigo, Indigo, Indigo, Indigo

Screeched and bleed out

Leaching feed out

Indispensable            

Rendered able

List of anther

List of anther

List of anther…

Let promise be bare

And group together

With speech impaired

Self-save troubled

Indigo, Indigo, Indigo, Indigo

Screeched and bleed out

Leaching feed out

Indispensable

Rendered able

List of anther

List of anther

List of anther…

 

Help on to rest

Separate and rend

In self there's change

Ground in manifestation

Indigo, Indigo, Indigo, Indigo

Screeched and bleed out

Leaching feed out

Indispensable

Rendered able

List of anther

List of anther

List of anther…

 

Left to your scars

You sound the horn

Lest beating heart

Believe in the porn

Indigo, Indigo, Indigo, Indigo

Screeched and bleed out

Leaching feed out

Indispensable

Rendered able

List of anther

List of anther

List of anther…

 

And all I am

Is all for want

Bide the time

And singe for lust

Indigo, Indigo, Indigo, Indigo

Indigo

Indigo

Indigo

Screeched and bleed out

Leaching feed out

Indispensable

Rendered able

List of anther

List of anther

List of anther…

 

 

All I want is vain in desire

All I want is vain in desire

All I want is vain in desire

All I want is vain in desire

All I want is none for all

All I want is none for all

All for want and none for all

© 2013 ObscurityNone


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You know brother love, in many ways a Durak means a fool, in my home indo language it means just a little thief, in a good way, a hooligan, again so many perceptions in your lovely river of words. Simple wars, aren't simple in my opinion, they all have a story... interesting INTP :) your "List of anther" is penetrating my soul... it is...
it is brilliant how you keep the reader focused. Your beautiful EGO is like COMMODUS in the Gladiator, :) like you told me full of himself, and blinded by his inner LOVE....(see your about me) oops, sorry, just a lovely thingy.... you should be proud for it.

Sis.



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1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

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11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Hermana. I get lost in your shower of compliments I receive from you, it's some.. read more

11 Years Ago

Let it be.... hermanito :) it is how it is :) thank you to for being you, and the most precious one .. read more



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You know brother love, in many ways a Durak means a fool, in my home indo language it means just a little thief, in a good way, a hooligan, again so many perceptions in your lovely river of words. Simple wars, aren't simple in my opinion, they all have a story... interesting INTP :) your "List of anther" is penetrating my soul... it is...
it is brilliant how you keep the reader focused. Your beautiful EGO is like COMMODUS in the Gladiator, :) like you told me full of himself, and blinded by his inner LOVE....(see your about me) oops, sorry, just a lovely thingy.... you should be proud for it.

Sis.



Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much, Hermana. I get lost in your shower of compliments I receive from you, it's some.. read more

11 Years Ago

Let it be.... hermanito :) it is how it is :) thank you to for being you, and the most precious one .. read more
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~ somewhere between "selfless" and "selfish" resides the "self"... and poetry often helps the poet and the reader explore the precise location of that "self"... ~ excellent work... i'm a fan of brutal introspection...in verse...

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

I'm glad you're enjoying yourself. x)
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11 Years Ago

~ hmmm...
an honest journey into self.... yes.. you dig deep and pull this off... i like the repetition in the lines, lyrics! awesome.

Posted 11 Years Ago


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ObscurityNone

11 Years Ago

Thank you, my dear. x)

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