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You know brother love, in many ways a Durak means a fool, in my home indo language it means just a little thief, in a good way, a hooligan, again so many perceptions in your lovely river of words. Simple wars, aren't simple in my opinion, they all have a story... interesting INTP :) your "List of anther" is penetrating my soul... it is...
it is brilliant how you keep the reader focused. Your beautiful EGO is like COMMODUS in the Gladiator, :) like you told me full of himself, and blinded by his inner LOVE....(see your about me) oops, sorry, just a lovely thingy.... you should be proud for it.
Sis.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Hermana. I get lost in your shower of compliments I receive from you, it's some.. read moreThank you very much, Hermana. I get lost in your shower of compliments I receive from you, it's something that I can tell is your honest opinion, and with that.. I grow to realize that you are something quite special in itself, something I cannot quite express, nor name. Perhaps nameless shall remain fitting, and Hermana, Sis, or Eli.. Takes it's place.
11 Years Ago
Let it be.... hermanito :) it is how it is :) thank you to for being you, and the most precious one .. read moreLet it be.... hermanito :) it is how it is :) thank you to for being you, and the most precious one on here almost. X
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You know brother love, in many ways a Durak means a fool, in my home indo language it means just a little thief, in a good way, a hooligan, again so many perceptions in your lovely river of words. Simple wars, aren't simple in my opinion, they all have a story... interesting INTP :) your "List of anther" is penetrating my soul... it is...
it is brilliant how you keep the reader focused. Your beautiful EGO is like COMMODUS in the Gladiator, :) like you told me full of himself, and blinded by his inner LOVE....(see your about me) oops, sorry, just a lovely thingy.... you should be proud for it.
Sis.
Posted 11 Years Ago
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
11 Years Ago
Thank you very much, Hermana. I get lost in your shower of compliments I receive from you, it's some.. read moreThank you very much, Hermana. I get lost in your shower of compliments I receive from you, it's something that I can tell is your honest opinion, and with that.. I grow to realize that you are something quite special in itself, something I cannot quite express, nor name. Perhaps nameless shall remain fitting, and Hermana, Sis, or Eli.. Takes it's place.
11 Years Ago
Let it be.... hermanito :) it is how it is :) thank you to for being you, and the most precious one .. read moreLet it be.... hermanito :) it is how it is :) thank you to for being you, and the most precious one on here almost. X
~ somewhere between "selfless" and "selfish" resides the "self"... and poetry often helps the poet and the reader explore the precise location of that "self"... ~ excellent work... i'm a fan of brutal introspection...in verse...
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